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Re: Of the Rain
i quite enjoyed this! the whole thing is rather morbid to me, (that's a good thing in this case). you got your point across somewhat...this is not meant to be ...
May 3, 2006 -
Re: Part 1 of: the escape
He was running through the underbrush. The wind was strong and unrelenting, seemingly taking direction from the overbearing rain. Everything was wet, which made it virtually impossible for him not ...
May 3, 2006 -
Re: forgotten love
It wasn’t often that Henry remembered to kiss his wife goodbye before he left for work. This might have disturbed any other woman, but Hannah was quite used to it ...
Apr 26, 2006 -
Re: i wonder
I tilted my head and bowed with my eyes, Looking farther down deep than I could have surmised. It wasn’t for lack of a happier day, But all things in ...
Apr 25, 2006 -
Re: A love unforgotten
A love Unforgotten It wasn’t such a dismal thing to let him slip into the sea And let love past diminish deep with wandering thoughts of him in me. I ...
Apr 24, 2006 -
Re: a kiss on broken lips
What good is a kiss on broken lips? Everything we've done and everything to come. I try to forgive you but how can i? your kisses mean nothing and you ...
Apr 10, 2006 -
Re: the unbound eyes
The Unbound Eyes Eyes that saw beyond all distance and reason. Eyes that pierced your face because you knew they saw too much. Eyes as green as they come, filled ...
Apr 5, 2006 -
Re: Crocodile
“Good evening,” said the Crocodile, “It’s nice to see you here. I wish to greet you with a smile and welcome you with cheer.” The tiny school of fishes four, ...
Mar 29, 2006 -
Re: before they met
She was aware of him. Since before she could remember she had known him, and now he was so close to her, that if she spoke his name aloud, he ...
Mar 8, 2006 -
Re: Noises in the night
So many voices were heard within that room of fears and souls. A nightmare of a place to be with nakedness and cold. She cringed beneath her nothingness a sob ...
Feb 23, 2006 -
Re: Dreamer
Oh dreamer, I think of you as oft as ever and with those thoughts of you I cry. The way you move just like a feather a dreamer dreams of ...
Feb 23, 2006 -
Re: hells desire
i know, i really that the "rat" line. thanks for the input!
Feb 23, 2006 -
Re: hells desire
he gave me hope a few stollen kisses and so much more than that but where is he now? my love is gone and i feel he was a rat. ...
Feb 21, 2006 -
Re: Red-faced sobbing Surprise
"But we all know death is life's paramount art" that was beautiful, amazing. it's one of the best lines i've ever heard in my life. i commend you. congradulations kid, ...
Feb 21, 2006 -
Re: The Forest of Darkness
it's a nice story, good job, but for some reason, it sonds a whole lot like the bigging of one of mine... the black forest, and yours the forest of ...
Feb 13, 2006
